DO'B/JB/ EH: Pitch

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Strengths:

• Good research and locations with Tesco + Tunnel
• Tesco effective for cinematography with The Shining Child
• Good difference between Tunnel + Domestic Sphere
• Credits on cereal boxes
• Already written to supermarket
• Interesting lighting, overlit bright/stark supermarket contrasting to dark tunnel
• Diegetic sound throughout very interesting
• Clear links between research and concept
• Technical confidence and planning

Questions:

• Little visuals of villain and is not at supermarket and appears in tunnel scene and is obscured by shadow.

Suggestions:

• Interaction with him in the supermarket: woman drops box in supermarket, villain picks up and walks off - enigma code?

Next Steps

• We need to consider how we can show the villain in a seemingly innocent way unknown to the character.
• We need to complete audience research in our target audience to see what else they might like to see, or to gauge their thoughts on ideas we have had
• Start our storyboarding process

• Follow-up with Tesco location

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